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Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/129168
Spawn:
Spawn is well detailed, easy design just go up and get fall dmg off trough the room?

Stage 1:
Probably the hardest of the stages (without last one) also well detailed... i do like your idea with the surf;) but i need to mention (after my opinion) that this is the 2nd hardest of all the stages.... only one abit harder is last stage....

Stage 2:
you used some stuff which weren't needed... you can skip 2nd part of first ramp, and the platform after 2nd ramp. this stage is probably the 2nd easiest of the stages. also a good designed stage. i like it more than stage 1.

Stage 3:
this is the easiest of the stages, its also the best of the stages after my opinion, its a good stage, also a really good designed one, smooth surfing and a fine ending:) i totally digg this.

Stage 4:
not that hard to, you can skip the first bhop by jumping from the ramp (instead of hitting water), you could probably have fixed that by adding a tiny glasswall between the platforms (you need to get under)... but as all the others great design, the smooth ramp is great;) its a god idea to use soft smooth ramps like that.

stage 5:
First ramp sucks, its abit to steep and it feels like it got a sucky boost on it (when you jump of it).... also a pretty unoriginal stage just surf on the sides, well... its well designed as the rest of the map....

Jail:
Its a great looking jail, its well functional to... the gameplay goes fien to the jail...

Overall its a good map, epic lightning and design, "totaly rapid", and yeah, it was fun playing:) i would totaly digg it if you either made some bigger stages, or made stage 5 funner...

design: 9.5

Detail 9

Fun 9

Gameplay 8.5

Looks 9.5

OVERALL 9.1
Approved
9.1/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/128609
Please translate it into english!
Disapproved
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/127278
Over all a great map. but with a few cons, i really like spawn, bonus and stage 3 (pic 3)....

also i really like THE DESIGN of last stage, unfortunatly i dont like the surf that much, its a nice map, it deserves a good rating to, but the surf had a leak of originalty, some of them where great, but some not excatly that great, unfortunatly.... keep up the mapping;)

Design: 9 because of the design, only really new good looking design was bonus and stage 7, the others where well designed to.

Gameplay: 8 sins a leak of originality (needs some more innovative gameplay)

Looks: 8.5, it looks great, but still some stages (like stage 5) aint that good looking as the other stages...

you could for example use a scheme for all of the map instead of just 1 stage designs:)

/hellraisedsurfer
Approved
8.5/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/88728
Animation: There's nothing to tell with animations, what animations have you used?.

2/10
Detail: theres no such details, its a normal PLAIN map. you could atleast have made some good looking brushes example instead of those in the sky...

5/10
Fun: like hoejhus always is... its always abit fun:)

9/10
Gameplay: Gameplay, nothing improved from normal hoejhus, you could atleast have changed some stuff to make gameplay more exciting.

also some secrets is making gameplay worse ... no matter if they are hard or easy :s...

5/10
Model: MODELS? have you even tought about models? well... you should think about the criterias you add to the map cause alot of them aint even in the map (for real)...

0/10
Teamplay: teamplay, nothing more than a normal map..

5/10
Texture: texture? just a poor snow retexture, looking worse than the normal textures, still you could have edited alot like, balanced different textures, adding some small snowpiles or something instead and maybe kept a few of the old textures...

also lightning would have been great

5/10

overall: 4,4/10



sorry if you think its unfair, but i just filled out the criterias you added to the assessment, at all its nothing special not much more than a normal hoejhus.

like all the surf_greatriver versions theres made, a few is new and innovative but most of them is a ripoff or worse than normal...

i dont have anything against the map, but this work could have been done on less than an hour.

nothing of this is offensive ment or anything, keep up the mapping and yeah next time i hope its better:)

/hellraisedsurfer
Approved
4.4/10
Textures > http://www.rtsbanana.com/textures/2573
Simply just an amazing pack!
Approved
10/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/125728
I wont assess yet sins i havent tried it...

but i can say one thing, please light your map... maybe you think its a pain but a map NEEDS light .... if you dont like the light just use mat_fullbright ....
Approved
7.2/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/125817
:) nice map overall, a few changes like some or just abit different textures... pretty dark design.

i really like it to, its a great map, abit anoying parts but got a fine difficult level....

i definatly loves the spawn;) keep up the good work...
Approved
8/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/125508
Pros: its a pretty free map, many ways to surf and many places to go.
Cons: - Steep ramps.
- Confusing teleports (you could atleast add a tiny block with a combine texture or so, so you can see that its a teleport)

- Arrows (you could make some way better ones on a few seconds ;) )

- Dev textures, well looks fine but real textures would be better.

- standard skybox
Improvements: Add:
- Custom skybox

- wide ramps

- Arrows

- teleport texture (in the doors on the floor)

and maybe add some normal textures:)
Notes: pretty fine map but still some work to do:)

Design: 8.5
Gameplay: 8
Looks: 7.5

Overall: 8.0/10
Approved
8/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/125244
Well ;) you can be proud of that map billy its looking so insane nice :) im definatly going to download it when i get a computer (should FINALY get it back monday) ....

- awesome map
- simply nice system (gj alex :D)

well... i should get computer monday... but i aint got steam atm D: so that sucks
Approved
10/10
Maps > http://www.rtsbanana.com/maps/122829
Design: the design is pretty well, it could be more "special" thats why i give it 8,5/10
Detail: its detailed ehm like a standard surf map, not many details if we look on the top maps like surf_torque2... i'll give it 8 because it could have much more details;)
Fun: its some pretty fun stages:) and its a pretty fun gameplay i like your idea even tough i had the idea of a map like this with sangre nueva for like half a year ago;) we didnt even start it so 10/10
Gameplay: the gameplay is great... still there could be more inovative ways of jail ending for a whole team so 9/10
Teamplay: teamplay is an important fact in this map... still theres some stuff about teambased skillsurf which doesnt balance that well like when someone beats 50% of the stages or so and he doesnt even get 1 in jail because of the team. 9,5/10

at all 9/10 good map:)
Approved
9/10
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